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Posted By : Dan Nelson - 2/12/2008 11:10 PM

I have written my first review and I thought this would be a good spot to post a link to it. I put it on my myspace page since it is a little long.

http://www.myspace.com/mrdannelson

Dan Nelson

King of Nothing and Emperor of Emptiness

Posted By : Lyn - 2/13/2008 10:14 AM

In his review of FS #9, Dan said...
"Tyler's Bed & Breakfast " by Lyn Perry is a short tale about ghosts which really did not move me. There are just too many possible answers to the underlying question. The caller could be a relative or a distressed ghost groupie or another ghost.

Someone asked me who the caller was, and I didn't know! lol Could be (the ghost of) Margaret, the wife of James who died at sea and who killed Captain Tyler. Or it could be a deranged caller - "ghost groupie" - I love it.

Lyn from ResAliens

Posted By : Jordan Lapp - 2/13/2008 12:08 PM

I liked the actual content of the review, but the formatting was a little rough. Leaving an extra space between reviews of different stories would be nice, and maybe the title of the story in bold would work well as well.

Jordan Lapp

Managing Editor

Every Day Fiction

Posted By : Lyn - 2/13/2008 1:10 PM

Ditto Jordan - since Dan gave a short comment about each story, maybe each piece could have it's own paragraph and highlight the title and author. It could turn a generic blog entry into a descriptive review, imo.

Lyn from ResAliens

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