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Posted By : Edward Knight - 8/6/2007 7:01 AM
I'm enjoying Shadowmarch. There are a few things about it that stick in my crawl a bit though. Although Williams trys to explain that they are not, the Funderlings still come across as traditional fantasy dwarfs. Sometimes I groan when he introduces a new character by name. All the Funderlings have rock names Chert, Opal, Granite, Flint... there was a particulary abbrasive character he named Pummice.
 
Thus far the most interesting character to me is Barrick, a dark brooding young man with a crippled arm, supposedly caused by his father the king pushing him down a set of stairs.
 
I guess my biggest gripe with the book is that I've been able to guess as to what's coming next pretty consistently. Williams writes in a way that sets everything up too obvioulsy. I keep waiting to be surprised, but it hasn't happened yet.
 
Still, thus far it's a fair read if you like traditional fantasy. The book starts out with a dragon hunt. He doesn't call the critter a dragon, but that's what it is. Traditional fantasy with the names changed to protect the innocent. :-)
 
 


Edward Knight
Editor
Journey Books Publishing

http://www.journeybookspublishing.com


Posted By : xiaotien - 8/6/2007 2:51 PM
i finished this a while back.
i bought the book when i went to
see williams' talk. he is very funny
and nice in person.

i didn't mind the stone names, i thought
it amusing. but yes, i do understand what
you mean about a name change just disguise
a race or creature we are very familiar with.

i think (being a girl) he does a great
job with making briony a heroine who
i can relate to. barrick def holds the most
mystery and is all angsty. haha!

i enjoyed the book. i think williams' is a
strong prose writer and storyteller.


cindy p.
a little sweet, a little sour.

Posted By : Hamstersbane - 8/6/2007 6:05 PM
Yeah, Shadowmarch and Shadowplay are fairly straightforward, but he's still a great storyteller and really good at juggling a big, complicated world.

Memory, Sorrow & Thorn and Otherland had some pretty big curveballs in them, though.


Jeff Parish
Caveat Lector
Here there be writers.


Posted By : Edward Knight - 8/6/2007 10:22 PM
I have to admit, he keeps throwng in new characters and little side plots. I'm only a third of the way througha nd there is a lot of stuff going on. Some of it seems so far away from the main plot that it does leave a little room for guesswork as to how he's going to tie it all together.

I agree that Briony probably would appeal to a lot of femail readers. She's a girls tied up in a man's world and not accepting the tidy little role she's been handed. She's tough and isn't about to buy into the old ways of doing things. She has a mind of her own. And she pretty much dislikes all men except her brother and father.


Edward Knight
Editor
Journey Books Publishing

http://www.journeybookspublishing.com