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MichaelEhart
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  		   Posted 10/10/2005 11:14 AM (GMT -5)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
Okay guys, my story "Voice of the Spoiler" is up now at the Sword Review. www.theswordreview.com/item.php?sub_id=228Take a look, tell me what you think.
I value the opinions here very highly---- don't worry about my feelings. I can always crawl under my desk and cry! [8D]*

*the glasses are to hide my tear-reddened eyes.


"It's a Living" Byzarium--- coming in November!
"Voice of the Spoiler" and "An Exorcism Straight, Hold the Elvis" Now appearing in The Sword Review
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  		   Posted 10/10/2005 12:14 PM (GMT -5)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
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Take a look, tell me what you think.


Well written, haunting stuff.

Just enough was explained to get the backstory across without telling all the details, thereby leaving a nice aura of mystery, too.

-- Paul McNamee
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http://www.dorancoyle.net
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Paul
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  		   Posted 10/10/2005 6:59 PM (GMT -5)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
That was a great read! Congrats!
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MichaelEhart
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  		   Posted 10/11/2005 2:38 PM (GMT -5)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
thanks for the kind words, guys!

"It's a Living" Byzarium--- coming in November!
"Voice of the Spoiler" and "An Exorcism Straight, Hold the Elvis" Now appearing in The Sword Review
"Oathbreaker" Mythica Vault
Host, 2005 Nebula Awards Live Chat, sff.net
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Third Axe Publishing
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  		   Posted 10/11/2005 7:32 PM (GMT -5)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
Pretty good story. The narrative was very clean and distinctive. I liked how the voice changed with the ages of the main characters. Nice touch. Through the first 3/4, I felt a little lost, but the ending tied it all together so well that it made sense, so I don't mind the first part at all.



Please visit www.brotherhoodofdwarves.com

Third Axe Publishing - Bringing the "story" back into storytelling.
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MichaelEhart
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  		   Posted 10/11/2005 7:54 PM (GMT -5)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
Glad you liked it!

"It's a Living" Byzarium--- coming in November!
"Voice of the Spoiler" and "An Exorcism Straight, Hold the Elvis" Now appearing in The Sword Review
"Oathbreaker" Mythica Vault
Host, 2005 Nebula Awards Live Chat, sff.net
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