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Dave
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   Posted 2/9/2006 5:33 PM (GMT -4)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
Not a writing brag really, more of a parent brag.

My 6 year old son was busy pecking away at the keyboard the other day and brought me two 'songs'

Each is Titled "Songs by Brendan Felts", typed here verbatim, including the word size change in the second 'song'

One day I saw a cloud it was shapt like an angle.
I love angles they have sparculey wings.
I never saw a star like this in the sky in the night.
I wish I was an angle so I could fly in the sky in the morning.
I saw an invisible angle it was flying around patting ones heads in the morning.
I was sitting on my chair lisaniung to my music it was pretty music its voice like an angle.

I love daiseys an that's my frovte color and I snift it one day it smelld good so I brote it inside
so every day when I wake up I smell it then I bring it in my kitchen then I leave it in front of me.
One day I saw a flower it was blowming and I said hellow hello and I said I need to bring you in side so I did

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   Posted 2/9/2006 6:00 PM (GMT -4)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
Oh, man! That is too cool, Dave. Thanks for sharing, and I predict you are going to have a very crowded refrigerator!!!

Give that kid a hug for me--mine's all grown up (sniff!)

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   Posted 2/10/2006 4:56 AM (GMT -4)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
Yeah, that's too cool, Dave!
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   Posted 2/10/2006 8:36 AM (GMT -4)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
Thanks for sharing, Dave. I really enjoyed reading these; your son has a beautiful poetic voice.

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   Posted 2/10/2006 9:01 AM (GMT -4)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
Dave that is so awesome -- it is amazing, "out of the mouths of babes"....

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Dave
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   Posted 2/10/2006 9:36 AM (GMT -4)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
Thanks guys....

As for his wedding day, I think I'll play the video of him boogying down to FatBoy Slims' "Because you Can Can Can" in the nude.....

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   Posted 2/10/2006 11:26 AM (GMT -4)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
No, no--definitely show that one to his fiancee BEFORE the big day...

:)

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