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 |  SC Bryce Aspiring Hammock Tester

       Date Joined Jan 2005 Total Posts : 1089 | Posted 3/19/2008 7:58 PM (GMT -4) |   | | | |
 |  Nik Adept

       Date Joined Feb 2007 Total Posts : 759 | Posted 3/19/2008 7:09 PM (GMT -4) |   | Mark S. said... Congrats to all of us who are in it! ;) Here's my opening line:
Though he might die, Emren would welcome being inside the coliseum walls just to get away from the unforgiving sun.
Nice! Nicholas Ian Hawkins
Forthcoming "Knowledge and Dust," in Magic & Mechanica, from Ricasso Press, Spring 2008
Published "What Heroes Leave Behind," in Return of the Sword, Flashing Swords Press, March 2008 "The Weald Maiden's Will," in Every Day Fiction, March 5, 2008 "Relativity," in FLASHSHOT, September 28, 2007
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 |  crystalwizard Forum Moderator

       Date Joined Nov 2006 Total Posts : 4587 | Posted 3/19/2008 6:45 PM (GMT -4) |   | | | |
 |  Bruce Durham Crom's Administrator & Drinking Buddy

       Date Joined Jan 2005 Total Posts : 605 | Posted 3/19/2008 5:23 PM (GMT -4) |   | Here's a bit from the opening of my piece. It's a slightly different take on a popular tale.
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DELUGE
“I will take those,” Asmadu said in broken Achaean, pointing at two goats in the half-crowded pen. “That one and that one.” He displayed a pair of fingers. “Two.”
The merchant, a slender Minoan, bobbed his head and smiled, displaying bad teeth.
Asmadu glanced over his shoulder. “Namhu, you have a firm grasp of their tongue. I want that male and that female.”
Namhu stepped up, a younger version of his stocky parent. “Why not spin him one of your tales, Father? That should be good enough barter for these animals.”
Asmadu placed a wrinkled hand on his son’s shoulder. “If I was fluent in their tongue, I would. But I am not, and that is why I asked you to speak for me. Now, haggle with the man.”
The boy nodded sheepishly before launching into an animated conversation with the merchant.
Asmadu watched the interaction for several moments before joining his wife Puduhepa at a stall piled high with an assortment of fabrics.
Gracing him with a warm smile, she fingered a bolt of cloth with work-hardened fingers. “Nice weave.” She dropped it and pointed. “Oh, see that cloak? What an interesting color on the border.”
Asmadu reached for the garment and touched the fabric. “Purple, they call it, produced from a mollusk local to Tyre. Much too expensive for us.” Come visit the Community Forums of CPI's Official Site of Conan author Robert E. Howard
Recently published: Valley of Bones in Return of the Sword, Night of the Meld in Flashing Swords #9, Marathon in Issue #10 of Paradox, Kalini Steel in Freehold: Southern Storm, Fool's Treasure in Freehold: The Protector and Old Havana in When the World Runs Thin
Upcoming: Abuse of Power in Flashing Swords #10 and Deluge in the Special Summer Issue of Flashing Swords
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  |  J.F. Keeping Stablehand
        Date Joined Mar 2008 Total Posts : 9 | Posted 3/18/2008 12:23 AM (GMT -4) |   | |
No one is more excited about this issue than me, because it contains my VERY FIRST PAID PUBLICATION! Woo hoo! So let me thank the Wizard of the Crystal and everyone else at Flashing Swords for overlooking the cardboard characters, cliched plot, and overwrought language (just kidding!).
I'm very happy to supply an excerpt, because, conveniently enough, I wrote my story with a teaser:
THE CROOKED BLADE
No one saw the figure approach; before they knew it, it was upon them, sword flashing red in the dying sunlight. Markl and Brand fell before they could do more than raise their weapons. Marrish saw his son's severed head strike the ground and roll to his feet. >>
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Grabbing his spear from the back of their little cart, Marrish yelled to his wife to flee. She whipped the reins and the cart jerked into motion as he turned to face their attacker. >>
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He had no more than the impression of a wide-brimmed peasant’s hat and a dark cloak before the apparition was upon him. He thrust, trying to retain the advantage of reach, but his opponent sprang aside, his cloak swirling like bat’s wings. Then he brought his blade down upon the haft of Marrish’s spear. The sword sang and the stout oak snapped like a twig.>>
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Marrish took a few steps backward and shifted the spear haft into a quarterstaff grip. His opponent darted toward him and he brought down the staff in a skull-crushing blow. But the cloaked figure caught it on an upraised forearm, and though there was the sound of bone breaking, there was no response from the cold eyes which glinted beneath the wide hat.>>
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Instead, the figure ducked forward and brought up his blade under Marrish’s guard. Fire exploded in Marrish’s belly as the sword thrust deep into him. He held his killer’s eyes for a heartbeat; then the blade was withdrawn and he crumpled slowly to the ground.>>
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As he lay there feeling his life’s blood seep into the dirt, Marrish turned his head and with satisfaction saw the cart with his wife and youngest child receding rapidly into the distance. He heard the crunch of boots upon the dirt road, then the sound of something heavy being dragged toward him. With an effort he flipped his head back over to see the lifeless eyes of his second son staring into his own. Then a dark-clad figure sat down upon his son’s corpse, as if it were a stool. >>
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Marrish tried to speak, but discovered his mouth was full of blood. He spat it out and gasped one word: “Wh-why?”>>
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The hat turned as the figure gazed in the direction of the receding cart. “Is this the road to Bellifas?” rasped an inhuman voice.>>
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Marrish’s cheek scraped against the dirt as he nodded once, twice. Then, as if expecting his courtesy to rewarded in kind, he asked again: “Why?”>>
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“I am going home,” was his killer’s only reply.
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 |  Scribe Stablehand
        Date Joined Mar 2008 Total Posts : 1 | Posted 3/17/2008 9:10 PM (GMT -4) |   | I've already seen one of the drawing that Richard's going to use to accompany my article The Era of Fairies and Dragons. This is going to be a wonderful issue, by all accounts!
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 |  Nik Adept

       Date Joined Feb 2007 Total Posts : 759 | Posted 3/17/2008 8:07 PM (GMT -4) |   | The excerpts speak well of the issue. Some of my favorite authors in here--I'm especially very anxious to read of the latest exploits of Bone and Gaunt. Nicholas Ian Hawkins
Forthcoming "What Heroes Leave Behind," in Return of the Sword, Flashing Swords Press, March 2008 "Knowledge and Dust," in Magic & Mechanica, from Ricasso Press, Spring 2008
Published "The Weald Maiden's Will," in Every Day Fiction, March 5, 2008 "Relativity," in FLASHSHOT, September 28, 2007
Visit my website, Trampler of Beautiful Phrases, at nihawkins.wordpress.com | | Back to Top | | |
 |  crystalwizard Forum Moderator

       Date Joined Nov 2006 Total Posts : 4587 | Posted 3/17/2008 5:39 PM (GMT -4) |   | | | |
  |  Chris Willrich Goblin Librarian
        Date Joined Sep 2007 Total Posts : 24 | Posted 3/17/2008 3:45 PM (GMT -4) |   | This is fun! Here's the start of my story "The Mermaid and the Mortal Thing."
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It is rare to glimpse a mermaid, rarer still a whole pod building sandcastles.
The travelers on the road from Palmary to Amberhorn paused upon a sea-cliff, staring down at the peculiar sight. Lovely figures the shades of emerald and coral and turquoise splashed about a sandy hollow licked by the rising tide. They sang and gestured, and sand sculpted itself in deference to their voices, a tower for a trill, rising steps for a staccato scale, a battlement for a crescendo. Like songs in a medley, the sandcastles blended together in a riot of styles, turrets to minarets to onion domes, and what the pair of wayfarers could see filled an arc of fifty yards. More was hidden by the cliffs.
"Let's go closer," said the poet Gaunt, her eyes widening.
"Why not?" mused the thief Bone, his eyes narrowing. "I have lived too long."
Still, he made sure his daggers were handy before approaching the beach, and he stopped his ears with wax.
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 |  erazmus Master

       Date Joined Jul 2005 Total Posts : 4474 | Posted 3/17/2008 12:27 PM (GMT -4) |   | | | |
 |  Nik Adept

       Date Joined Feb 2007 Total Posts : 759 | Posted 3/17/2008 12:23 PM (GMT -4) |   | This looks great! Nicholas Ian Hawkins
Forthcoming "What Heroes Leave Behind," in Return of the Sword, Flashing Swords Press, March 2008 "Knowledge and Dust," in Magic & Mechanica, from Ricasso Press, Spring 2008
Published "The Weald Maiden's Will," in Every Day Fiction, March 5, 2008 "Relativity," in FLASHSHOT, September 28, 2007
Visit my website, Trampler of Beautiful Phrases, at nihawkins.wordpress.com | | Back to Top | | |
 |  warriorchick85 Stablehand
        Date Joined Mar 2008 Total Posts : 3 | Posted 3/17/2008 12:13 PM (GMT -4) |   | Hi, my first post on here.
I'm having the poem "Dragon Fire" published in this issue. Here's the first few lines...
Before they left they brought forth one Meant to pray and bless each son Going to war, to raid, to fight To sail his ship throughout the night
She blessed the sword, the bow, the shield And prayed their victims soon would yield She cut the throat and slew the bull In bloody Viking ritual
Her craft mysterious, deep and dark Struck awe and wonder in each heart Now flaming eyes on figureheads Would light the way for miles ahead
This is, quite obviously, a poem about Vikings. The editors didn't care for the first one I submitted and asked if I could write another--which I considered a great honor. :) So this is it. | | Back to Top | | |
 |  Shade53 Acolyte

       Date Joined Jan 2005 Total Posts : 217 | Posted 3/17/2008 9:34 AM (GMT -4) |   | I'm incredibly thrilled to be a part of this! I am not really sure what to post as an excerpt so I will post the beginning...
Moronar's Chosen
By Sarah Wagner
Two piercing whistles split the day open as Synova called to her tekamoc. The bird swooped down to the mountain meadow, his broad gray wings casting her in shadow. “Good boy, Daekuh.” She pulled herself up onto his back and fastened the harness she wore securely to the straps around him. “Home.” With gentle ease, the large bird lifted up into the air and flew south towards Mocinol, the center of the Jaffine Nation.
Synova loved the view of her home from the sky. Even in her haste to reach the Matriarch’s Temple, it calmed her. The expanse of the crop fields, the tendrils of water sectioning the land, the great stone temple in its center, all familiar like the lines on her palm. Dense foliage to the north, mountains to the west, and the sea to the south and east protected the Jaffine Capital.
The moment Daekuh landed in the Temple gardens, Synova unhooked her harness, leapt from his back and ran for the flat-roofed stone pyramid that jutted up from the center of the village. She pulled the ties on her split-skirt as she ran, freeing the panels and returning it to a proper skirt form.
Pausing to brush a hand over the three faces carved in the entry, she rushed into the Temple. Cumnar, the Matriarch and her two closest advisors, Kalmar and Regor stood, huddled at the stone altar in the center of the temple, whispering.
“The Hartaanian Converters,” she dropped to her knees before them, “they’re coming!”
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 |  Jared Evers Neophyte

       Date Joined Feb 2008 Total Posts : 133 | Posted 3/17/2008 5:06 AM (GMT -4) |   | crystalwizard said... FS doesn't do sci-fi, remember?
Hey, just trying to do my part to help out. *grins*
On that note, here's a short bit from my story. Tomorrow, when it's not quite so late at night as it is now, I'll see if I can sneak another one in here.
**** Silent Dirge by Jared Evers
Sataurnos looked at his men for a long moment. His four men. Given the odds their lifestyle provided, they were each lucky to be alive. Yet even taking luck into consideration, he couldn't help but be surprised at how lonely the number four could seem.
"Third Infantry, First Battalion, B Company." Each of the men stiffened involuntarily at Sataurnos's words. "It's only been seven years since the war with Cambon ended. All of the friends we've lost in those seven years, yet we lost even more during the war. But we didn't lose them to soldiers of the Cambon army. Those soldiers were just defending their homeland. It was Vaelas who prolonged that damn war, and every man we watched fall to the ground did so in response to the Patron Father's orders. For the glory of Thayr."
He shook his head in disgust. "Vaelas's Thayr. Not ours. Now I know I don't want power—what sane man would? But more than that, I don't want him to have power. And we have a chance now to take it from him." | | Back to Top | | |
 |  RFLong Stablehand

       Date Joined Feb 2008 Total Posts : 11 | Posted 3/17/2008 5:01 AM (GMT -4) |   | Wow. This is exciting. Here's the opening of my story 'Elements'.
*** Elements By R.F. Long
The surface of the lake stretched out across the valley, as smooth as a polished stone. Iasc slid gratefully from the back of his foul-tempered pony and the shingle crunched beneath his feet. He cast a dark look to Gwalchmai for making him ever get up on the cursed beast. He could have asked him to slow the pace, but Iasc would see himself damned before he would ask Gwalchmai of the Setantii to give him quarter. Until recently, the Setantii were nothing but enforcers of the Roman walls, keeping the Picts out of the Gododdin. He didn't even belong on this side of the narrow sea of Eriu.
Using the strength of will Master Perchal taught him, Iasc centred himself and ignored his own feelings. "We're here."
Gwalchmai studied him a little longer than was entirely necessary. His eyes, like slivers of crystal in the sunlight, never wavered. Then he dismounted too.
Other followers of the Elemental Path counted Iasc one of the most talented. He had heard some of his brethren whispering, wondering if he could read souls like Master Perchal; or worse, if he could plunder them like the famed air elemental, Niamh, was said to do. His abilities were still growing, but he knew that they were formidable. He didn't feel much pride in his talent. It was just another factor in his makeup that marked him out as different, like being short and slight for his age, like his brown eyes in a country known for blue and grey. Gwalchmai looked like his mother lived two miles down the road, while Iasc knew he was different, had always known, from the moment he could recognise the doubts in the blue eyes of his father and what they meant.
As if sensing his companion's thoughts, Gwalchmai looked back and gave an encouraging grin. Iasc scowled at him, resenting his warrior build, his blue eyes, even the way he sat his horse. The bloody warrior did everything right, every last thing. ***
The summer special sounds amazing. I can't wait to see everything else!
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  |  crystalwizard Forum Moderator

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 |  Jared Evers Neophyte

       Date Joined Feb 2008 Total Posts : 133 | Posted 3/17/2008 2:45 AM (GMT -4) |   | | Pulp fiction? I do have a sci-fi pulp detective short that needs just one or two more rewrites. *grins* | | Back to Top | | |
 |  crystalwizard Forum Moderator

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