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Dan Nelson
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  		   Posted 2/12/2008 11:10 PM (GMT -4)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
I have written my first review and I thought this would be a good spot to post a link to it.  I put it on my myspace page since it is a little long.
 http://www.myspace.com/mrdannelson

Dan Nelson
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Lyn
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  		   Posted 2/13/2008 10:14 AM (GMT -4)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
In his review of FS #9, Dan said...
"Tyler's Bed & Breakfast " by Lyn Perry is a short tale about ghosts which really did not move me. There are just too many possible answers to the underlying question. The caller could be a relative or a distressed ghost groupie or another ghost.
Someone asked me who the caller was, and I didn't know! lol Could be (the ghost of) Margaret, the wife of James who died at sea and who killed Captain Tyler. Or it could be a deranged caller - "ghost groupie" - I love it. :-)

Lyn from ResAliens

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Jordan Lapp
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  		   Posted 2/13/2008 12:08 PM (GMT -4)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
I liked the actual content of the review, but the formatting was a little rough. Leaving an extra space between reviews of different stories would be nice, and maybe the title of the story in bold would work well as well.

Jordan Lapp
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Lyn
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  		   Posted 2/13/2008 1:10 PM (GMT -4)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
Ditto Jordan - since Dan gave a short comment about each story, maybe each piece could have it's own paragraph and highlight the title and author. It could turn a generic blog entry into a descriptive review, imo.

Lyn from ResAliens

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