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Okay. So I unvaled this story (so far) here: http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/DavidMPitchford/278531/
It has some racey parts - a mix of SFF & Erotica. Drop in and tell me what you think, please.
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Rob Mancebo
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MysticWino said...
Okay. So I unvaled this story (so far) here: http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/DavidMPitchford/278531/
It has some racey parts - a mix of SFF & Erotica. Drop in and tell me what you think, please.

-  Ran through the first half a dozen chapters, I sent you commentary via email so it's not chopped & smurfed by the PM system. 

 

Good luck with it,  Rob

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Rob,

Thanks for the feedback. I really appreciate your time and effort.
David

Rob Mancebo said...
MysticWino said...
Okay. So I unvaled this story (so far) here: http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/DavidMPitchford/278531/
It has some racey parts - a mix of SFF & Erotica. Drop in and tell me what you think, please.

-  Ran through the first half a dozen chapters, I sent you commentary via email so it's not chopped & smurfed by the PM system. 

 

Good luck with it,  Rob

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