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   Posted 3/25/2008 6:08 AM (GMT -5)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
There are a bunch of people currently on livejournal talking about synopses, and even posting up the synopses for their published novels. It's great to be able to compare the two.

Josh Palmatier started it off, I believe, so check out his LJ first (jpsorrow.livejournal.com)


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   Posted 3/22/2008 4:28 PM (GMT -5)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
What sort of details about synposis do you want to know, Michael.

It might be easier to give you answers and information you can use, if you ask a few questions to start with.


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   Posted 3/22/2008 1:38 AM (GMT -5)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
HI
If any body tells me some details about synopsis plz.


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   Posted 3/16/2008 12:22 PM (GMT -5)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
Be careful which kind of synopsis (see publisher's guidelines). Some want a chapter by chapter breakdown (less common). The other kind is more like a jacket blurb and is used to write such and other promotional materials. So don't look at it as a chore but an opportunity to write your own jacket copy.

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   Posted 3/15/2008 10:48 PM (GMT -5)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
I can tell you what I want to read when someone sends me a synopsis.

I want to read something that tells me what the story is about. If it's about a waitress that has an affair, gets jilted and runs off to join the circus where she becomes a clown and solves the strangest mystery of the century, then that's what I want you to tell me.

I assume just about everyone else is the same way.


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   Posted 3/15/2008 7:55 PM (GMT -5)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
and that's the best answer of all, Skadi (may I abbreviate?). We'll never be perfect at it, each one will take an effort to write. I hate doing 'em, I hate doing the back cover blurb, too, but hey! They have to be done. As a great poet once said,

In a world of fun,
There's shit to be done.


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   Posted 3/15/2008 1:26 PM (GMT -5)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
I still don't know how to write a proper one, but my stabs have gotten me signed and have gotten two other novels looked at by agents... hope that helps.

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   Posted 3/15/2008 11:06 AM (GMT -5)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
JeanLauzier said...
I just finished a synopsis for a mystery novel.

I've got some worksheets (I LOVE worksheets!!!) that really helped. If anyone would like them...I'll be glad to share.


I think we could all use them, Jean. Do you have them up for download any where?
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   Posted 3/15/2008 10:55 AM (GMT -5)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
I found this 7-point plotting list from my writing class very helpful. Think about answering the questions in the fewest possible words.  Once you zero in on the bare bones of the story, the synopsis and keynote blurb come a bit more easily.  At any rate, I do wish you success in turning out a great synopsis!
 

7-POINT PLOTTING CHECKLIST

> >

  1. Hero’s goal (what he wants)
  2. First obstacle (why he doesn’t get to goal)
  3. What he does to try to change situation (nothing works)
  4. Something breaks (believes he’s reached his goal)
  5. Create disaster—he loses ground (not just a setback—something big)
  6. Even worse disaster happens, catastrophe where all appears lost
  7. After enormous struggles, he finally reaches his goal

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   Posted 3/15/2008 10:47 AM (GMT -5)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
Worksheets to help write a synopsis??? Oooo yes please! :p


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   Posted 3/14/2008 11:13 PM (GMT -5)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
I just finished a synopsis for a mystery novel.

I've got some worksheets (I LOVE worksheets!!!) that really helped. If anyone would like them...I'll be glad to share.
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   Posted 3/13/2008 10:34 AM (GMT -5)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.

Super!

I've spoken with a lot of writers who find the hardest part to be just starting.

Kudos! Keep in mind how fulfilling this was, so that next time you can focus on that instead of the silliness of dread. Oh, did I mention that the hyperbole was rather entertaining as well? I find that when things get to that overblown sense of lockdown frustration the best thing for me to do is enter fully into it and blow into a theatre of the absurd so that I can laugh off the stress and get to the solution part.

Again, pat yourself on the back. Positive self-reinforcement is highly effective motivation. yeah


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   Posted 3/13/2008 7:11 AM (GMT -5)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
Whether it was due to your advice, or just the relief of being able to vent - writing the synopsis went more smoothly than ever before. Maybe, I'm just getting better at the darned things...

For what it's worth, I went with the advice to write the blurb, and then I used that to scafold the outline and then used the outline to scafold the synopsis. And it seemed to work - I passed on the bourbon, by the way and stuck to the redbush tea... Anyway, the input was much appreciated - it just great being able to share one's frustrations with other likeminded souls!


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   Posted 3/12/2008 5:58 PM (GMT -5)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
Yeah, I hate having to write a synopsis. I find bourbon helps.

Then some editing once the bourbon wears off.


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   Posted 3/12/2008 5:26 PM (GMT -5)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
>Writing the cursing synopsis!

for heavens' sake, you do that every time you tell anyone what it's about. What you're probably trying to do is turn out a finished, polished synopsis on the first draft.

You wouldn't do that with your story though. You know you're doing to edit your story.

So why do that with your synopsis.

Start typing and just type out what the thing is about. Ramble. mention all the details and don't put them in any particular order:

The story starts when a big wind drops a tree on this guys house. Oh yeah, and before the big wind, there was a dog running down the alley, howling. Anyway, after the wind, and the tree on the guys house, the neighbors found a cow floating in their pool. While the wind was blowing a car horn was being heard. That happened before the neighbors found the cow in the pool. So the neighbors called the cops and they found that the guy had vanished. In fact, the house didn't look lived in at all. The one with the tree on it. So the cops got suspicious and discovered that the house was owned by a mysterious corporation in Diluth.

Get it all down like that, then go back and edit. rearrange sentences, cut out details that aren't necessary to tell, revise. and do it again.

Just like you would anything else you write.


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   Posted 3/12/2008 5:19 PM (GMT -5)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.

What Rob said.

It helped me to write mine as though I were pitching it to a friend - a specific friend who is too busy and impatient for me not to get straight to the point.

But, I do feel your pain! It helped me to write a cover blurb first as though for the back cover. It also helped to do it at a time I was already busy as heck writing short pieces of this and that. Sneak up on yourself and do it. Send it to a friend who's not in the usual loop and ask if it sounds like something they'd be into, and why or not. In the end, it really is just a letter to a friend to interest them in your work. So what if you haven't met that friend yet. Make friends. smilewinkgrin


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   Posted 3/12/2008 2:00 PM (GMT -5)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
Pretend you're trying to tell me your novel at a cocktail party. You need to do it quick, hitting the highlights that I would find most interesting (because my glass is empty, and I'm heading for the bar). If you can summarize your novel in thirty seconds, you have your synopsis.

Yes, I understand it's not as glib as that, but it's close. Try saying it out loud; inspiration may come.



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   Posted 3/12/2008 1:46 PM (GMT -5)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
Ahhh... just completed the 4th rewrite of my latest novel - and am now facing the worst job of all. Writing the cursing synopsis! Does anyone else out there find this as eye-bulgingly difficult as I do? Especially knowing that most agents/publishers will skim through this piece of writing first before even bothering to pick up my masterpiece...

Any suggestions as to how to get through this task more easily will be MOST welcome. If not... will thank you for listening to my whining, anyhow.


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