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Fever
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   Posted 12/23/2006 4:23 PM (GMT -4)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
I've been working on a novel for the past six years now, a hybrid between fantasy and drama.  I am now in the process of rewriting and editing the book, and I was thinking about posting a chapter online every two or three weeks as I finish editing it.  This way, my audience will have a chance to get to know me and my writing style.  However, a buddy of mine who's been published before told me if I did so, some publishers would not want to publish the book, as it has techincally already been "published".  Does anyone know anything about this, and is there a way around this problem? 
Thanks a bunch guys. 
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   Posted 12/23/2006 5:34 PM (GMT -4)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
I'm no expert here but I think the bottom line is if your book is good enough a publisher will make an exception...one recent success story by a writer named Scott Lynch had him actually land a big book deal on his first novel when an editor had a look at his online work. All his excerpts were of course removed pretty quickly. Also, for novels I don't think pubs are too concerned with previously published stuff, they just don't want free access to somethgin competeing with their possible release.

But having something online does constitute having it 'published' in a sense, and your friend is right that it can be a turn off -- but this is especially the case with short stories, or complete works presented in there entirety. My own guess would be as long as you aren't offering an entire novel for free online you should avoid the 'previously published' thing.

There are probably some additional technical dodges aroudn it as well, such as asking people that read your work to join a membership-only forum or registry, then your work is considered more or less privately distributed, or shared 'among friends' and not in the public eye.

I'm sure we'll get an expert in here to clear up my half-understanding of the matter.
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   Posted 12/23/2006 7:37 PM (GMT -4)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
If you post your novel online most publishers will consider the novel previously published. Bill's right about online publication working well for some and dooming others.

My personal advice is: exhaust traditional avenues of submission and publication (including small press print and electronic publishers) before you opt to self-publish in any form.

Good luck with your novel!


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   Posted 12/23/2006 7:40 PM (GMT -4)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
Thanks for the response mate.  So even if I post 10% of the novel online, I am basically shooting myself in the foot?  If so, then I'd rather not risk it.
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   Posted 12/23/2006 7:50 PM (GMT -4)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
Thanks for the response mate. So even if I post 10% of the novel online, I am basically shooting myself in the foot? If so, then I'd rather not risk it.

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I think it's better to try another route first. There's no real reason to post your novel online before you have a publisher. While it's true that a small number of writers have been "discovered" by posting their novels online, I am of the mind that, for most people most of the time, it's still better to try submitting an unpublished (in any form) ms. first. That's just an opinion. But, as an acquisitions editor I look at it this way: if something has already been partially posted online, it's simply not fresh, unless it has created significant "buzz" which is very hard to pull-off with fiction. If it has been previously published in full online and hasn't created significant "buzz" then its desirablity and sales potential is already in question.

If you exhaust all other avenues first and then post it online and it is a success, you can always double-back and snag a big contract! From the same poeple who rejected you on the first round. ;-)


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   Posted 12/23/2006 9:20 PM (GMT -4)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
Thanks for info Daniel.  I've heard it is very hard for an author that has no previous publishing experience to be noticed and picked up by a publisher.  Its kinda like a toss of the dice.  Since I"m an artist and musician myself, I wanted to create some pictures and music to accompany my story, and use a website to "get it out there" before the book is published.  After all, I could be wrong, but even if the book gets published and hits shelves, what will make people pick it up if no one knows about it? 
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   Posted 12/24/2006 10:18 AM (GMT -4)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
Daniel is right... and by posting parts of it yourself and creating buzz for it, you'll then have a few readfers now interested in a book that isn't available for sale. Even if a publisher sees your work online and loves what you've posted so far, there is still plenty of lapse time between a publisher seeing the complete manuscript and it being actually printed (sometimes a year or more) so all that pre-press buzz you created by going to all the trouble of posting chapters, artwork (which the publisher will handle 99% of the time) and hype won't mean a thing.

I don't know you personally and this isn't an attack on you, but as a small-press publisher everything I've ever had submitted to me so far in the two years Carnifex Press has been around that had the same idea from the author (free chapters setup on a cool-looking website, with cover artwork done, illustrations, character sketches, etc.) has been subpar, and most liley rejected by several publishers already... but instead of just self-publishing the book, the author now thinks this is the way to sell it to the world. It doesn't work. Some publishers might think you've already been rejected so many times already and go into reading it in a negative.

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   Posted 12/24/2006 4:38 PM (GMT -4)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
After all, I could be wrong, but even if the book gets published and hits shelves, what will make people pick it up if no one knows about it?
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Timing means a lot here. Most books that are lucky enough to wind up on bookstore shelves are only there for mere weeks, so targeting exposure for the book and timing it is key. By securing an authentic big or small press publisher you avail yourself of their distibutors, connections to retailers, and publicity apparatus. Also, their knowledge of how to make sales in the book industry happen which isn't as easy as many people think it is.

"Hanging a shingle" before you have a good source of distribution and additional publicity won't get you very far, I don't think. I could bore you to tears with what it takes to make a *single* sale of any title, but I won't. Just consider this, however: most people have very "set" buying patterns and that is why big companies spend so much money trying to beg, bowrrow, buy, or steal private information for all of our shopping habits.

So until you have both good publicity (and posting free chapters of an unpublished novel is usually *not* good publicity) plus a mechanism to get your product to the people who buy fiction in the place where they feel comfortable buying, you are facing overwhelmingly bad odds.

Getting into the bookstores and on Amazon alone won't sell your book, either. No-one impulse buys a book they've never heard of -- not at list price :wink: So, the idea of having publicity for an unpublished novel just doesn't make any sense. You have to have publicity and then have the book be "instantly" available to readers via trusted sellers.

There is a rule of "seven" that is well-known in publishing and in marketing and publicity circles: this means it takes seven instances of exposure before you can get a customer to purchase your product. That means the customer must have seen word of your product seven times before they will begin to have interest in purchasing it, and even then: it must be readily available from a *trusted* seller, as I mentioned.

Self-published authors routinely have a very low margin of book-sales and a lot of this is due, not to a lack of quality, but to the lack of the product being available through what consumers feel is a reliable source.

When was the last time you bought a new, unknown product directly from its manufacturer? I'm guessing never, but even if I am wrong, that is the exception to the rule.

And exceptions are always possible, so keep that in mind as you consider my upstream comments and Armand's. We're not saying your concept isn't possibly advantageous, we are saying the odds and experience speak more to the contrary and that putting your unpublished ms. online could prove detrimental to securing a publisher later.


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   Posted 12/30/2006 9:32 PM (GMT -4)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.

Daniel and Armand,

I just wanted to drop in and say thanks for the advice you shared with Fever--I learned a thing or two from your thoughtful insight myself!

Having read hundreds of magazine submission guidelines (literally cry ), I knew that most editors consider a short story that has been posted somewhere online--even one that has been workshopped in a public forum--as previously published, so I already assumed the same would hold true for a novel. I can't really add anything to what Daniel has said already, except to share a personal anecdote. A few years back a couple writer-friends of mine and I began writing a shared-world project, and early on we toyed with the idea of posting some of the stories online. I am sure glad we decided against it, because the now-finished project is now under serious consideration by a publisher!

On the other hand, I am currently posting installments of a serial novel as I write them on my blog. But I have no intention of trying to market that to a publisher--it is basically just a writing exercise done for the pleasure of it. It's full of autobiographical in-jokes that only friends and a few fellow-writers would get anyway. In the (highly unlikely) event that it developed enough of a following to garner the attention of a small-press publisher, that would be fine with me, but it's not what I'm expecting nor attempting to do. The only scenario I can think of where it could become something more than it is (a fun writing exercise shared with a small, appreciative audience) is this: if I achieved moderate success with another novel, enough so for my publisher to think, "Hey, he's got this online project that he's been writing; we could polish it up and publish it as his 'next' novel." Again, highly unlikely...But the odds ARE better than winning the lottery. smilewinkgrin


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   Posted 12/31/2006 4:19 PM (GMT -4)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
Thanks for the advice mates.  What I think I'll do instead is post a few short stories that have no direct relation whatsoever to my novel on my website instead. This way, I can (hopefully) achieve a similar effect and not put my real novel in jeopardy. 
Alright, cheers and happy new year guys. 
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   Posted 1/1/2007 7:06 PM (GMT -4)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
Good luck, Fever!! Hope you eventually sell a ton of books!

And please pardon my lengthy ramblings....


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   Posted 1/5/2007 5:46 PM (GMT -4)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
You'd be amazed at all the stuff you can learn just by reading posts from Daniel and Armand. Some days I actually feel like a giddy schoolboy. :-)


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   Posted 1/5/2007 9:45 PM (GMT -4)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
Scott,

Thanks for the cool shout-out above... I usually just follow Daniel's lead and try to sound semi-intelligent.

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   Posted 1/9/2007 7:36 PM (GMT -4)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
I want to stick my 2 cents in here.

You don't have to publish your novel online to put work online. Why not write some shorts, some flash fiction, and some other things like that then put them online?

Write them in the same sort of genre as your book and make metion of the as yet unavailable book at the end of them.

That will get you exposure and it won't risk your novel.

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Taking the contrarian view... Youse guys familiar with John Scalzi's "Old Man's War"? John serialized his novel section by section on his blog over a long period. (Two years, I think...) anyway, I believe it was Patrick Nielsen Hayden who read what Scalzi published and grabbed it for TOR, where it, GHOST BRIGADES, and whatever his latest is have been doing really well!

Now that having been said, Scalzi is no neophyte writer. He is a professional and has been published all over the place, but as a magazine non-fiction author.

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   Posted 3/22/2007 5:02 PM (GMT -4)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
Professional writers can get away with things that neophytes can't.

I have a complete short story up on my website that exhausted its potential for reprint (I sold it three times). Then there is a bit of free flash that is complete. The rest is just excerpts from novels that are already published.

I'm cautious about my giveaways. And that's precisely what any original work published on a website is. They are a double-edged sword that cuts both ways.


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   Posted 3/22/2007 6:25 PM (GMT -4)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
Mr. Bewildered said...
Youse guys familiar with John Scalzi's "Old Man's War"? John serialized his novel section by section on his blog over a long period.
Cory Doctorow and Charles Stross are doing much the same thing. I think these two authors are doing it to promote their novels, which debut at about the same time.  Their theory is that online reads generate real world sales.  The key here, of course, is that they are doing it to sell a pre-existing book, not generate buzz for something that doesn't exist yet.. smilewinkgrin


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   Posted 4/27/2007 8:45 PM (GMT -4)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.

Hey Fever,

What Daniel says is true, yes. I think that the basis of this idea is probably (I'm guessing here) that in the publisher's opinion, if readers can read your work for free online, then why would they spend money to have a hard copy?

Then again, you certainly don't want to just hand your work out and risk theft... I suggest a site such as www.critters.org - posting your work to this site will not render it "previously published" as the site is password protected.

Alternatively, find someone you trust to read over your chapters and give you critique... More than one person is usually the best idea. If you haven't found anyone, then I'd be happy to read and critique for you. Of course, you don't know me, so whether to trust me or not would be your call ;-)

Daniel said...
If you post your novel online most publishers will consider the novel previously published. Bill's right about online publication working well for some and dooming others.

My personal advice is: exhaust traditional avenues of submission and publication (including small press print and electronic publishers) before you opt to self-publish in any form.

Good luck with your novel!


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   Posted 4/27/2007 8:52 PM (GMT -4)    Quote This PostAlert An Admin About This Post.
Fever... One of my closest friends is an editor, and let me share a little secret with you: If your writing is up to their standards, and your content is interesting, then you stand a chance whether or not you've been previously published. Of course, it's also important to make sure that you submit your work to the correct publisher (in other words, there's no point in submitting a horror manuscript to a publication that only publishes romance) - then again, I'm sure that you already know that.
 
Also, have you written your synopsis yet? Most publishers won't read a full novel... You will need to write a synopsis, giving your entire plot away (they need to know if the storyline is good from beginning to end, before they waste time reading something that they feel doesn't have a good ending). Then you'd send your synopsis and the first three chapters to a publisher. If they like it, they'll request the rest. Of course, this is a general rule and some publishers may work differently, so it's best to check directly with the publisher you want to submit your novel to, before just sending them something.
 
My advice to you is this: Find somewhere "safe" (in other words, somewhere that your work would not be considered previously published, and where your work is not available for anyone browsing the internet to read) and have strangers critique your work - trust me, strangers are not afraid of hurting your feelings and can give you some darn good ideas on how to improve your story... Once you've made any edits on comments that you agree with, THEN submit it to a publisher... At least you will know that your writing quality is good...
 
Anyhoooo that's just my two cents and I'm high on coffee right now :P
Fever said...
Thanks for info Daniel.  I've heard it is very hard for an author that has no previous publishing experience to be noticed and picked up by a publisher.  Its kinda like a toss of the dice.  Since I"m an artist and musician myself, I wanted to create some pictures and music to accompany my story, and use a website to "get it out there" before the book is published.  After all, I could be wrong, but even if the book gets published and hits shelves, what will make people pick it up if no one knows about it? 


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Vanessa said...

My advice to you is this: Find somewhere "safe" (in other words, somewhere that your work would not be considered previously published, and where your work is not available for anyone browsing the internet to read) and have strangers critique your work - trust me, strangers are not afraid of hurting your feelings and can give you some darn good ideas on how to improve your story... Once you've made any edits on comments that you agree with, THEN submit it to a publisher... At least you will know that your writing quality is good...

Anyhoooo that's just my two cents and I'm high on coffee right now :P


Best place I can think of to do this is the critters workshop at critters.org
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